Writing Task(Feb 16th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever been intimidated by someone’s appearance? What are the benefits of being physically attractive?
>>I’m not intimidated. But I’m scared of the people who have mental diseases because I don’t know and guess what they would do.
Being physically attractive is important. People fascinated by a person who is physically attractive since he manages himself well. And it’s natural for a person to be attracted by someone who looks good physically.
강사 첨삭
Hello, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about it!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I’m not intimidated.
>> Correct!
But I’m scared of the people who have mental diseases because I don’t know and guess what they would do.
>> Correct!
Being physically attractive is important.
Being physically attractive is important.
>> Correct!
People fascinated by a person who is physically attractive since he manages himself well.
>> Correct!
And it’s natural for a person to be attracted by someone who looks good physically.
>> Correct!
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