Writing Task(Feb 17th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you do to encourage yourself when going through hard times? Does it work?
>> I don’t want to lie about myself. I’m actually a kind of person who try to avoid the trouble instead of facing it and trying to tackle with it. So, whenever I found out there would be some problem ahead, I try not to face it.
But. I’m also trying to change my personality ; trying to focus on the solution instead of worrying about the problem.
강사 첨삭
Hello, U [이름]!
That is a good mindset you have there.
Thank you for sharing!
~T.Roanne ^_^
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I don’t want to lie about myself.
>> Correct!
I’m actually a kind of person who try to avoid the trouble instead of facing it and trying to tackle with it.
>> Correct!
So, whenever I found out there would be some problem ahead, I try not to face it.
>> So, whenever I found out that there would be some problem ahead, I try not to face it.
But. I’m also trying to change my personality ; trying to focus on the solution instead of worrying about the problem.
But. I’m also trying to change my personality ; trying to focus on the solution instead of worrying about the problem.
>> But, I’m also trying to change my personality; trying to focus on the solution instead of worrying about the problem.
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