Writing Task(Feb 18th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you rather go to someone else\'s house for a party or have it at yours? Why?
>> I prefer to go to someone else’s house. There would be lot of house chores after the people I invited to my house leave. It’s okay if only they come, but they always come with their children. My daughter seldom messed up her room and the living room when playing with toys. It’s her characteristic. However, most of the children don’t. I don’t care about how many adults visit and stay in my house, but with their children, I might have to rethink.
강사 첨삭
Good day, U [이름]!
Well, that is indeed true and it\'s pretty hassle to hold a party at home.
Thank you for answering!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I prefer to go to someone else’s house.
>> Correct!
There would be lot of house chores after the people I invited to my house leave.
>> Correct!
It’s okay if only they come, but they always come with their children.
>> Correct!
My daughter seldom messed up her room and the living room when playing with toys.
>> Correct!
It’s her characteristic.
>> Correct!
However, most of the children don’t.
>> Correct!
I don’t care about how many adults visit and stay in my house, but with their children, I might have to rethink.
>> Correct!
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