Writing Task(Feb 23th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe your dream house.
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The house I would live in is the one that oversees the ocean. I love Marvel Cinematic Universe, Especially, who started this whole universe, which is The Iron Man. I attatched the picture of his house you can see in The Iron Man 2.
Since I live far from the sea, whenever I go to the beach I think that I want to live near beach. And so do my lovely two woman.
And of course, with the garage, which has a big space in it enough to store the Super Cars. And it would be great if it were fully equipped with artificial intelligence system. Every morning if I wake up and say “Open the curtain”, the curtain opens by itself recognizing my voice.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Wow! That is indeed a nice plan and nice place to live. I know that you are striving hard to achieve your dreams. May it all be granted someday! ^^
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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The house I would live in is the one that oversees the ocean.
>> Correct!
I love Marvel Cinematic Universe, Especially, who started this whole universe, which is The Iron Man.
>> Correct!
I attatched the picture of his house you can see in The Iron Man 2.
>> I attached the picture of his house you can see in The Iron Man 2.
Since I live far from the sea, whenever I go to the beach I think that I want to live near beach. And so do my lovely two woman.
>>Since I live far from the sea, whenever I go to the beach I think that I want to live near the beach. And so do my lovely two women.
And of course, with the garage, which has a big space in it enough to store the Super Cars.
And of course, with the garage, which has a big space in it enough to store the Super Cars.
>> Correct!
And it would be great if it were fully equipped with artificial intelligence system.
>> And it would be great if it were fully equipped with an artificial intelligence system.
Every morning if I wake up and say “Open the curtain”, the curtain opens by itself recognizing my voice.
>> Correct!
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