Writing Task (Feb 9th, 2022)

2022-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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What do you think is the best job? What do you think is the worst? >> It might be not realistic, but the best job is to make huge bucks doing what I love to do. I haven’t found it yet, but I’m still trying to find it. I don’t think I love my job. Truth be told, I don’t even like it. I naively chose this job, working as a civil servant in a local government, only because it is very stable. We never get fired unless we make serious problems, like embezzling the budget, injuring people severely, etc. However, that’s it. That is all I’m content with the job I have. But, now, I have a quite different perspective, which is, that I can quit and change the job at any time only if I have fully ready to make a living doing other things. I’m gaining self-confidence and s strong belief in my ability!!! And the worst job is doing what I’m about to do today, whether I like or not. That means the man does not live his life.

강사 첨삭

Hello, U [이름]!

I understand your point there. I think the best job is really earning pretty well while enjoying the job at the same time. I know that life is pretty harsh sometimes, but I\'m sure that all your hard work will be paid off in the future. I hope you\'d be able to find a job or maybe have a business that you enjoy doing. 
Just keep believing that you can make it, BETTER DAYS ARE COMING! 

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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It might be not realistic, but the best job is to make huge bucks doing what I love to do.
>>Correct! 
I haven’t found it yet, but I’m still trying to find it. I don’t think I love my job. 
>>Correct! 
Truth be told, I don’t even like it. 
>>Correct! 
I naively chose this job, working as a civil servant in a local government, only because it is very stable. 
>>I naively chose this job, working as a civil servant in a local government, only because it is a very stable. 
We never get fired unless we make serious problems, like embezzling the budget, injuring people severely, etc.
>>Correct! 
However, that’s it. 
>>Correct! 
That is all I’m content with the job I have. 
>>Correct! 
But, now, I have a quite different perspective, which is, that I can quit and change the job at any time only if I have fully ready to make a living doing other things. 
>>Correct! 
I’m gaining self-confidence and s strong belief in my ability!!!
>>I’m gaining self-confidence and a strong belief in my ability!!!
And the worst job is doing what I’m about to do today, whether I like or not. That means the man does not live his life.
>>Correct! 

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