Writing Task (Jan 13th, 2022)

2022-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

학생이 쓴 원문

1. If you could stop a bad habit that you have, what would you stop? >>>I want to stop procrastinating what I really have to do today. I know it’s a really bad habit, but I can’t stop doing it. I know the fact that if I don’t walk today, I have to run tomorrow! But it’s not that easy to break the bad habit. However, since it’s the first month of the year 2022, I’m going to try to break that bad habit! That’s what I want to teach my daughter. She won’t learn from what I tell her. She will definitely learn from what I\'m doing! 2. If you found a wallet with $1,000 in it, what would you do? >>>I’ll put that wallet in the postbox so that a mailman can return it to it’s owner. I would definitely do as I said, because I want someone else who gets my lost wallet would do the same if I lost my wallet.

강사 첨삭

Hello, U [이름]! 

Wow! Great sentence construction and expressions! Keep it up! ^_^
Thank you for making time to answer the questions. 

Have a great day! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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#Q1:
I want to stop procrastinating what I really have to do today. 
>> Correct! 
I know it’s a really bad habit, but I can’t stop doing it. 
>> Correct! 
I know the fact that if I don’t walk today, I have to run tomorrow! 
>> Correct! 
But it’s not that easy to break the bad habit. 
>> Correct! 
However, since it’s the first month of the year 2022, I’m going to try to break that bad habit! 
>> Correct! 
That’s what I want to teach my daughter. 
>> Correct! 
She won’t learn from what I tell her. 
>> Correct! 
She will definitely learn from what I\'m doing!
>> Correct! 

#Q2:
I’ll put that wallet in the postbox so that a mailman can return it to it’s owner. 
>> I’ll put that wallet in the post-box so that a mailman can return it to its owner. 
I would definitely do as I said, because I want someone else who gets my lost wallet would do the same if I lost my wallet.
>> Correct! 

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