Writing Task(Jun 27th, 2022)
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How has technology changed the movie industry?
With the technology used in the film industry, we can see any characters move like a human. For example. in the movie \"The Lord of The Rings\",the character \"Smeagol\", called in another [이름]e \"Gollum\" plays a key role. His voice, facial expressions, sly smile and awkward movements are like a real human. And in the film \"Guardians of The Galaxy\", the characters like Groot and Rocket act like a human as well.
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Hi, U [이름]!
That is really true! I actually like those characters, especially the cute little Groot!
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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With the technology used in the film industry, we can see any characters move like a human.
>> Correct!
For example. in the movie \"The Lord of The Rings\",the character \"Smeagol\", called in another [이름]e \"Gollum\" plays a key role.
>> For example, in the movie \"The Lord of The Rings\", the character \"Smeagol\", called in another [이름]e \"Gollum\" plays a key role.
His voice, facial expressions, sly smile and awkward movements are like a real human.
>> Correct!
And in the film \"Guardians of The Galaxy\", the characters like Groot and Rocket act like a human as well.
>> Correct!
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