Writing Task(Jun 64th, 2022)
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I have never thought of living without my cell phone. Sometimes, I went to the office leaving my phone at home, but I came back home to retrieve it.
I got at least 20 calls from my co-workers, citizens and my family. All the calls I got were the important to me. If there\'s no one I have to take a call from, I can live without the phone since I use my phone nearly when I talk with someone. I seldom play games with the phone, nor did search for the Internet. I think I\'m still living in the analog-era.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
That is indeed true! It is really hard not to have a cell phone these days, since most people use it for communication.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one! Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I have never thought of living without my cell phone.
>> Correct!
Sometimes, I went to the office leaving my phone at home, but I came back home to retrieve it.
>> Sometimes, I go to the office, leaving my phone at home, but I go back home to retrieve it.
I got at least 20 calls from my co-workers, citizens and my family.
I got at least 20 calls from my co-workers, citizens and my family.
>> Correct!
All the calls I got were the important to me.
>> All the calls I got were important to me.
If there\'s no one I have to take a call from, I can live without the phone since I use my phone nearly when I talk with someone.
>> Correct!
I seldom play games with the phone, nor did search for the Internet.
>> I seldom play games with the phone, nor did a search for the Internet.
I think I\'m still living in the analog-era.
>> Correct!
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