Writing Task(Mar 11th, 2022)
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What influences you to make good choices?
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It is my wife who influences me to make choices whenever I’m hesitant. And, in most cases, the choices I made with the advice of my wife turned out to be right or better. She can see other aspects of an incident or a problem with her own perspective. She is very logical and remembers what she’s told and read. She is definitely smarter than me. I don’t think I made good choices by myself.
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Hi U [이름]!
How are you doing? Are you feeling better now? I hope you are doing fine~
Anyway, you are lucky to have a wife that you can lean on and influences you to make good choices. She is indeed a great wife and you are a good husband as well because you listen to her.
Thank you for sharing and have a nice day!
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It is my wife who influences me to make choices whenever I’m hesitant.
>> Correct!
And, in most cases, the choices I made with the advice of my wife turned out to be right or better.
>> Correct!
She can see other aspects of an incident or a problem with her own perspective.
>> Correct!
She is very logical and remembers what she’s told and read.
>> Correct!
She is definitely smarter than me.
>> Correct!
I don’t think I made good choices by myself.
>> Correct!
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