Writing Task(Mar 16th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you fear your midlife crisis?
Actually, I’ve never thought about “Midlife Crisis”, even though I heard the notion a few times before. I don’t fear about it. I don’t need to do. Whatever situations I would confront, I believe that I could handle it. But I have to admit that it could take longer than I think it would take to solve.
What I’m interested in, at the moment, is about what I could and would teach my daughter. I need a lot more experiences, not the same kind of, but a similar or a different one to get more knowledge and wisdom to give lectures to my littler daughter.
강사 첨삭
Hello, U [이름]!
You may be not a perfect father, but you are a wonderful person who has a lot to experience and to share with your daughter. I know that your daughter is looking up to you. Whatever battles you may encounter, JUST KEEP GOING!
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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Actually, I’ve never thought about “Midlife Crisis”, even though I heard the notion a few times before.
>> Correct!
I don’t fear about it.
>> Correct!
I don’t need to do. Whatever situations I would confront, I believe that I could handle it.
>> Correct!
But I have to admit that it could take longer than I think it would take to solve.
>> Correct!
What I’m interested in, at the moment, is about what I could and would teach my daughter.
What I’m interested in, at the moment, is about what I could and would teach my daughter.
>> Correct!
I need a lot more experiences, not the same kind of, but a similar or a different one to get more knowledge and wisdom to give lectures to my littler daughter.
>> I need a lot more experiences, not the same kind of, but a similar or a different one to get more knowledge and wisdom to give lectures to my little daughter.
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