Writing Task(Mar 17th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
If you were given three wishes, what would you wish for?
If I have a chance to make my wishes come true.
First, I want to go back to exactly right before this COVID19 Pandemic, which would be in September in 2019 when the first case of the virus was reported in China. With the knowledge I have now, I would write a long report about the virus and try to persuade the world as well as the Korean government to let them know how dangerous the virus is, how to prevent the spread and how important to wear a mask and maintain social-distancing measures.
And If I could travel back in time, exactly to when in early February in 2020, I would invest all of my assets in stock markets because all of the stock markets in the world at that time plummeted after the early stage of the pandemic. Looking back, that moment was one of the few life-time opportunities.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
How are you? How about your family? Are you all doing fine?
Let\'s hope this pandemic will end very soon.
I will call you later~
Thank you for sharing ^^
~T. Roanne ^_^
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If I have a chance to make my wishes come true.
>> Correct!
First, I want to go back to exactly right before this COVID19 Pandemic, which would be in September in 2019 when the first case of the virus was reported in China.
First, I want to go back to exactly right before this COVID19 Pandemic, which would be in September in 2019 when the first case of the virus was reported in China.
>> Correct!
With the knowledge I have now, I would write a long report about the virus and try to persuade the world as well as the Korean government to let them know how dangerous the virus is, how to prevent the spread and how important to wear a mask and maintain social-distancing measures.
>> Correct!
And If I could travel back in time, exactly to when in early February in 2020, I would invest all of my assets in stock markets because all of the stock markets in the world at that time plummeted after the early stage of the pandemic.
And If I could travel back in time, exactly to when in early February in 2020, I would invest all of my assets in stock markets because all of the stock markets in the world at that time plummeted after the early stage of the pandemic.
>> Correct!
Looking back, that moment was one of the few life-time opportunities.
>>Looking back, that moment was one of the few lifetime opportunities.
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