Writing Task(Mar 21th, 2022)

2022-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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When people are wealthy or successful, do they have a special responsibility to help others? Yes, they have. I think the quantity of the resources in the world is limited. The fact that a person is rich means there is at least one another person who is poor. The money or the service I get today comes from someone else, which means we, humans, are all linked together in some way. If I get super-rich, I have to share what I earn from others. And the people who get the help of others who are rich should not feel a shame for their being poor. Sharing what I have with others is a way of practicing “The Nobless Oblige”

강사 첨삭

Hi, U [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. Talk to you later~

~T. Roanne ^_^
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Yes, they have.
>> Correct! 
I think the quantity of the resources in the world is limited. 
>> Correct! 
The fact that a person is rich means there is at least one another person who is poor. 
>> The fact that a person is rich means there is at least one other person who is poor.  
The money or the service I get today comes from someone else, which means we, humans, are all linked together in some way. 
>> Correct! 
If I get super-rich, I have to share what I earn from others. 
>> Correct! 
And the people who get the help of others who are rich should not feel a shame for their being poor. 
>> And the people who get the help of others who are rich should not feel ashamed of being poor. 
Sharing what I have with others is a way of practicing “The Nobless Oblige”
>> Sharing what I have with others is a way of practicing “The Noblesse Oblige”

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