Writing Task(Mar 23th, 2022)
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How would you like to spend your holiday?
My summer holiday this year? Well. I haven\'t thought about it yet. Usually, we take a few weeks that fall on the period of the summer vacation time of the kindergarten my daughter goes to. Mostly the period is the last week of June and the first two weeks of August, which is three weeks in total. As we did every year, for the first few days, we would go to the Resort we frequent to. The Resort has a special kid’s playground, spa and a wide plain field with grasses in it, so children wouldn’t get hurt when they fall.
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My summer holiday this year?
>> Correct!
Well. I haven\'t thought about it yet.
>>Well, I haven\'t thought about it yet.
Usually, we take a few weeks that fall on the period of the summer vacation time of the kindergarten my daughter goes to.
>> Usually, we take a few weeks that fall in the period of the summer vacation time of the kindergarten my daughter goes to.
Mostly the period is the last week of June and the first two weeks of August, which is three weeks in total.
>> Correct!
As we did every year, for the first few days, we would go to the Resort we frequent to.
>> As we did every year, for the first few days, we would go to the resort we frequent to.
The Resort has a special kid’s playground, spa and a wide plain field with grasses in it, so children wouldn’t get hurt when they fall.
>> The resort has a special kid’s playground, spa and a wide plain field with grasses in it, so children wouldn’t get hurt when they fall.
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