Writing Task (Mar 25th, 2022)
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Would you rather spend a week in the forest or a night in a real haunted house?
I would choose the latter one. I would absolutely be horrified if I had to spend a night in a real haunted house. But I would be horrified, too, if I had to stay for a week in the forest. It\'s the matter of a night which means less than twelve hours verses a week, which is 168 hours ; 24 hours a day times 7 days equals 168 hours. Which one should I choose? 12 hours or 168 hours? And in the forest, I can not guess what would happen to me. I could be attacked by a wild animal, fall down or slip down. But in a haunted house, all I can guess of what would happen is to meet ghost. Actually, I really, really hate even to think of myself in the house. However, if I have to choose one, I would choose to be in a real haunted house.
강사 첨삭
Hello, U [이름]!
That\'s too funny! I actually laugh while reading your answer because I can imagine your expression. Anyway, for sure you will not be going to a forest or entering a haunted house, so don\'t worry.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I would choose the latter one.
>> Correct!
I would absolutely be horrified if I had to spend a night in a real haunted house.
>> Correct!
But I would be horrified, too, if I had to stay for a week in the forest.
>> Correct!
It\'s the matter of a night which means less than twelve hours verses a week, which is 168 hours ; 24 hours a day times 7 days equals 168 hours.
>> It\'s the matter of a night which means less than twelve hours verses a week, which is 168 hours; 24 hours a day times 7 days equals 168 hours.
Which one should I choose? 12 hours or 168 hours?
>> Which one should I choose, 12 hours or 168 hours?
And in the forest, I can not guess what would happen to me.
>> And in the forest, I cannot guess what would happen to me.
I could be attacked by a wild animal, fall down or slip down.
>> Correct!
But in a haunted house, all I can guess of what would happen is to meet ghost.
>> But in a haunted house, all I can guess of what would happen is to meet a ghost.
Actually, I really, really hate even to think of myself in the house.
>> Correct!
However, if I have to choose one, I would choose to be in a real haunted house.
>> Correct!
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