Writing Task(May 13th, 2022)
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What is the worst purchase you have made?
I can\'t think of anything about the wrong purchase I\'ve ever made. I seldom buy things. I always have less then three pair of shoes, and even those shoes are what my wife bought for me. I don\'t like to spend money on buying clothes, shoes, jewelries, and etc. I\'d rather pay for some useful lectures, like, about \"How to make a goof first impression\"or \"the best way of giving a presentation\"
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Hi, thank you for sharing!
I can\'t think of anything about the wrong purchase I\'ve ever made.
>> Correct!
I seldom buy things.
>> Correct!
I always have less then three pair of shoes, and even those shoes are what my wife bought for me.
>> I always have less than three pairs of shoes, and even those shoes are what my wife bought for me.
I don\'t like to spend money on buying clothes, shoes, jewe and etc.
>> Correct!
I\'d rather pay for some useful lectures, like, about \"How to make a goof first impression\"or \"the best way of giving a presentation\"
>> I\'d rather pay for some useful lectures, like, about \"How to make a good first impression?\" or \"the best way of giving a presentation?\"
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