Writing Task(May 17th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could make a movie, which celebrity would you pick as yourself?
I want him to be Chris Evans, the Captain America who is really handsome, tall and muscular with super strong power. I\'ve always wanted to be a hero like one of the Avengers members. I did working-outs really hard to have his muscular body.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Oh, that is really good. He is one of the celebrities that I like. Well, I guess you have to really work hard to achieve that kind of body and maintain.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I want him to be Chris Evans, the Captain America who is really handsome, tall and muscular with super strong power.
>> Correct!
I\'ve always wanted to be a hero like one of the Avengers members.
>> I\'ve always wanted to be a hero like one of the Avengers\' members.
I did working-outs really hard to have his muscular body.
>> I was working out really hard to have his muscular body.
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