Writing Task(May 2nd, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What can you say about this quote \"the only constant thing in this world is change\"? Do you fear change?
World changes as humans evolve. So , change is irrisistable. I don\'t feel fear a out the word \'Change\'. But I fear if someone use the power or the knowledge to change the world into a worse place. If someone use his power to press the nuclear launch button to make a change in the world, that change is dreadful. I fear that change.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Oh, that is indeed true. All things around us changes and even we do change. It\'s up to us how we react to the changes.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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World changes as humans evolve. So , change is irrisistable.
>> The world changes as humans evolve. So, change is irresistible.
I don\'t feel fear a out the word \'Change\'.
>> I don\'t feel a fear out the word \"Change\".
But I fear if someone use the power or the knowledge to change the world into a worse place.
>> But I fear if someone uses the power or the knowledge to change the world into a worse place.
If someone use his power to press the nuclear launch button to make a change in the world, that change is dreadful.
>> If someone uses his power to press the nuclear launch button to make a change in the world, that change is dreadful.
I fear that change.
>> Correct!
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