Writing Task(May 30th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow! How can you be so fast like this? I just sit on my chair to do my last Friday\'s writing task and I saw your feedback! We hung up the phone just five minute ago! What a thunder speed you have!
What is one thing you have tried to change, but couldn\'t?
I\'m still trying to change one thing. That is to get the important, time consuming and difficult job done as the first thing in the morning. Some days I succeed but some days, I can\'t make it. However, it seems that I\'m a kind of person who prefers to do easier works first because I can feel a sense of achievement a few times when I do easier ones. I know that, to get ahead of others and succeed, I have to choose to do important and time consuming works first. But I can not resist the instant gratification that follows after I get the small works done.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
I think I\'m used to it Thank you for the compliment, I guess~
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about it.
Have a good night!
~T. Roanne ^_^
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I\'m still trying to change one thing.
>> Correct!
That is to get the important, time consuming and difficult job done as the first thing in the morning.
>> Correct!
Some days I succeed but some days, I can\'t make it.
>> Some days I succeed, but some days, I can\'t make it.
However, it seems that I\'m a kind of person who prefers to do easier works first because I can feel a sense of achievement a few times when I do easier ones.
>> Correct!
I know that, to get ahead of others and succeed, I have to choose to do important and time consuming works first.
>> Correct!
But I can not resist the instant gratification that follows after I get the small works done.
>> But I cannot resist the instant gratification that follows after I get smaller works done.
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