Writing Task (May 3th, 2022)

2022-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

학생이 쓴 원문

It is not ‘NOW’. It is not when I’m ready and I’m fully prepared. For me, the best time to try something new is when I set the schedule. I usually do as I set, following my schedule. I make up my mind and write it down on my note, then I start doing it, no matter what happens. So, I like writing somethings on the note if there’s one that I want to do. I proiritize the works. And I write the dates and the exact time on each date. With my note and my memos, I can’t remember or analyze.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Thank you for sharing!

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It is not ‘NOW’. It is not when I’m ready and I’m fully prepared.
>> Correct!
For me, the best time to try something new is when I set the schedule. 
>> Correct!
I usually do as I set, following my schedule. 
>> Correct!
I make up my mind and write it down on my note, then I start doing it, no matter what happens. 
>> Correct!
So, I like writing somethings on the note if there’s one that I want to do. I proiritize the works. 
>> So, I like writing some things on the note if there’s one that I want to do. I prioritize the works. 
And I write the dates and the exact time on each date. 
>> Correct!
With my note and my memos, I can’t remember or analyze.
>> Correct!

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