Writing Task (May 5th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What can you say about this quote \"YOU ONLY LIVE ONCE\"?
Having only one chance to live, I shouldn’t waste my energy, passion, money and time. Every time I’m in the situation when an important decision has to be made, I should choose the option that I think would need a lot of efforts with upcoming huge success, instead of choosing the other one that would need a rather less effort but with a minor success. I only live once. I don’t believe reincarnation or afterlife. Everyone starts dying after fertilization. And I’m also in the process of dying even at the moment. I have to cherish all of the moments in my life. I have to choose to to right thing every time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Well, that is a good thought. We should enjoy every moment of our life. Life\'s not perfect, so I don\'t think we have to aim to be like that. We just need to enjoy what we get to have and experience.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_6
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Having only one chance to live, I shouldn’t waste my energy, passion, money and time.
>> Correct!
Every time I’m in the situation when an important decision has to be made, I should choose the option that I think would need a lot of efforts with upcoming huge success, instead of choosing the other one that would need a rather less effort but with a minor success.
>> Correct!
I only live once. I don’t believe reincarnation or afterlife. Everyone starts dying after fertilization.
>> I only live once. I don’t believe reincarnation or the afterlife. Everyone starts dying after fertilization.
And I’m also in the process of dying even at the moment.
>> Correct!
I have to cherish all of the moments in my life.
>> Correct!
I have to choose to to right thing every time.
>> Correct!
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