Writing Task(May 9th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could do your dream job 10 years from now, which job would you choose?
I want to make English a second Mother Tongue. If it happens, we don\'t have to spend huge money on learning English. Knowing the language is like we have a Pandora\'s Box that guides us to a whole new world. Without knowing the language, we only contact the information that have only been interpreted in Korean language, which means there\'s a limited amount of information. I know there exist several simultaneous interpretation apps and translation apps. Some people say \"In the near future, there may come a moment when we don\'t need to learn English. Instead, we can use highly-developed, AI-based translation tools in any language to communicate with foreigners. But, I\'d like to ask them back this question. \"Don\'t you ever remember you told us that exactly when it turned into the year 2000 from 1999? And it\'s now been more than 20 years since then. And we\'ve been still learning foreign language.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
That is actually true! The world is changing, so we are adapting to its changes. In most cases, we are developing almost everything to make it comfortable for us to access a lot of things easier. However, there are still some things that we can\'t just avoid and change easily. Speaking the language that you want to use is more comfortable rather than using an AI because we don\'t even know if it\'s really accurate and we can\'t express our thoughts well using it.
Thank your for sharing your thoughts on this one! Good night!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I want to make English a second Mother Tongue.
>> Correct!
If it happens, we don\'t have to spend huge money on learning English.
>> Correct!
Knowing the language is like we have a Pandora\'s Box that guides us to a whole new world.
>> Correct!
Without knowing the language, we only contact the information that have only been interpreted in Korean language, which means there\'s a limited amount of information.
>> Without knowing the language, we only contact the information that has only been interpreted in Korean language, which means there\'s a limited amount of information.
I know there exist several simultaneous interpretation apps and translation apps.
>> Correct!
Some people say \"In the near future, there may come a moment when we don\'t need to learn English.
>> Correct!
Instead, we can use highly-developed, AI-based translation tools in any language to communicate with foreigners.
>> Correct!
But, I\'d like to ask them back this question. \"Don\'t you ever remember you told us that exactly when it turned into the year 2000 from 1999?
>> Correct!
And it\'s now been more than 20 years since then. And we\'ve been still learning foreign language.
>> And it\'s now been more than 20 years since then. And we\'ve been still learning a foreign language.
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