[Writing Task] Name one or two popular Seollal gifts for parents. Limit your answer to 3-5 sentences
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Good afternoon, Sue! ^^,)
Happy Lunar New Year! 새해 복 많이 받으세요
You did a good job in answering your homework.
However, you only talked about money. I agree that it\'s the best, but you could have named other possible presents for parents during \'Seollal\' or Lunar New Year. See you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
Thank you for calling me like as well ;)
>>> Thank you for calling me last night as well. ;)
I can not find the meaning \'Seollal\' in Internet.
>>> I couldn\'t find the meaning of \'Seollal\' on the internet.
So I will just describe gifts for parents.
>>> That\'s why I will just name common gifts for parents.
I think cash is a best gift for parents.
>>> CORRECT
People judge money as negative, as it doesn\'t looks full-hearted, but my opinion is different.
>>> People think money is evil as it doesn\'t show sincerity, but my opinion is different.
With money, parents can buy or pay all the thing they would like to do.
>>> With money, parents can buy or pay for the things they really want/like.
Additionally, it is more blissful for them if their offsprings are with them, when the time they spend the money.
>>> Additionally, it is more blissful for them if their offspring are with them when they go shopping.
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