Writing task: Use the following words in sentences: 1. suggested 2. idealistic 3. realistic
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1. Please follow the suggested instruction.
2.The idea is too idealistic. It doesn\'t match with the reality.
3. The artist is famous for his realistic capture of the world.
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1. Please follow the suggested instruction.
>> Correct
OR: Please follow the suggested instructions.
2.The idea is too idealistic. It doesn\'t match with the reality.
>> Correct
OR:
>> The idea is too idealistic and doesn\'t align with reality.
3. The artist is famous for his realistic capture of the world.
>> Correct
OR:
>> The artist is renowned for his realistic depiction of the world.
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