[Writing Task] Use the word STUDY in a sentence as a: noun & verb

2020-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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[Writing Task] Use the word STUDY in a sentence as a: 1) noun - research or a detailed examination and analysis of a subject, phenomenon, etc. 2) verb - to examine or investigate carefully and in detail 1) There have been a lot of research studies to figure out the reason of the global worming. 2) A lot of scientists have tried all the efforts, but human couldn\'t find out an appropriate solution.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, Sue!
(^___^)//
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
I have made some modifications to make the context of your sentences clearer or easier to understand.
We can talk about this in class later if you want to.^^
See you then!

__Teacher Mayleen :)


1) There have been a lot of research studies to figure out the reason of the global worming.
>>> There have been a lot of research studies to figure out the cause of global worming.
2) A lot of scientists have tried all the efforts, but human couldn\'t find out an appropriate solution.
>>> A lot of scientists have tried all the efforts to study, but couldn\'t find an appropriate solution.

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