Writing task: What activities do you want to explore? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to ride a hot air balloon.
When I went to Turkey, I wanted to try it, but I couldn\'t due to bad weather.
However, I heard a story from someone who experienced it, and they said it was wonderful.
So, I want to explore Cappadocia in a hot air balloon.
강사 첨삭
Hi, MK!
WOW! You did very well in writing your sentences and in expressing your thoughts in this homework! I am really amazed by how you answered this question. Anyway, I haven\'t tried riding a hot air balloon either, and I also imagine it would be a good experience. Hopefully, we can try it in the future!
- T. Caitlyn
I would like to ride a hot air balloon.
>> CORRECT
When I went to Turkey, I wanted to try it, but I couldn\'t due to bad weather.
When I went to Turkey, I wanted to try it, but I couldn\'t due to bad weather.
>> CORRECT
However, I heard a story from someone who experienced it, and they said it was wonderful.
However, I heard a story from someone who experienced it, and they said it was wonderful.
>> CORRECT
So, I want to explore Cappadocia in a hot air balloon.
So, I want to explore Cappadocia in a hot air balloon.
>> CORRECT
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