[Writing Task] What diseases do you worry about getting in your age now?
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Sue! ^-^ Happy Thursday!
Now, the world is working to contain novel coronavirus (nCoV).
Just like you, I am also very much concerned about this issue.
Maybe we can talk about this briefly tonight before studying the book.^^
Enjoy the rest of the day!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
Right now, I\'m worrying about pneumonia from China.
>>> Right now, I\'m worrying about the coronavirus from China.
It is a worldwide disease now, as it has powerful infectious.
>>> It is a worldwide outbreak now as it is highly infectious.
I hope that it would be safe in Korea and other neighbors.
>>> I hope that it will be safe in Korea and in our other neighboring countries.
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