Writing task: What is the best place for a vacation in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to Europe 5 years ago. I went to France, Italy, and Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France. When I went up to the Eiffel Tower,I saw the place where Nafleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance. I would like to visit again next time if I have a chance.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Just take note of the spelling of \'Napoleon.\' I was also curious: from the Eiffel Tower, were you able to see Notre-Dame Cathedral, or did you go there on another trip? Also, it is a dream for me to visit European countries someday, and I hope you can also visit again soon!
- T. Caitlyn
I went to Europe 5 years ago.
>> CORRECT
I went to France, Italy, and Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France.
>> I went to France, Italy, and the city of Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France.
When I went up to the Eiffel Tower,I saw the place where Nafleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance.
>> When I went up the Eiffel Tower, I saw the place where Napoleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance.
I would like to visit again next time if I have a chance.
>> CORRECT
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