Writing task: What is the color of your bedroom? Why did you choose that color?
학생이 쓴 원문
My beroom\'s color is white.
I didn\'t choose that color. My house is rental house so color was choosen previous people.
I think white color makes room looks big.
And it feels more comfortable than other colors.
I will keep this color continuously.
강사 첨삭
Hi, MK!
Thank you for doing your homework. I see! I agree with you. I am also renting, so the color of my apartment was decided by the owner. I also think white is a nice color since it can make your room brighter, but on the other hand, it’s hard to maintain.
- T. Caitlyn
My beroom\'s color is white.
>> My bedroom\'s color is white.
I didn\'t choose that color.
I didn\'t choose that color.
>> CORRECT
My house is rental house so color was choosen previous people.
>> My house is a rental, so the color was chosen by the previous occupants.
I think white color makes room looks big.
I think white color makes room looks big.
>> I think white color makes the room look bigger.
And it feels more comfortable than other colors.
And it feels more comfortable than other colors.
>> CORRECT
I will keep this color continuously.
I will keep this color continuously.
>> I will keep this color.
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