Writing Task: What’s the weirdest or most unusual greeting you’ve ever received?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t think of something weird I\'ve received, but I have the experience that I made someone embarrassed. When I was young, I used to follow my mom to shopping mall or any other places. So those places are filled with people, not a few. I sometimes mistook another person for my mom and I talked to her casually (despite of the first time we saw each other...) or touched her. I think many people who I mistook were very sudden and unexpected. I didn\'t who she is but also she didn\'t know me. I don\'t know why I did it especially when I was young. But Im sure that everyone has that experience like me. Maybe I didn\'t have awareness. Too young to recognize the situation before I see someone\'s face and talk to someone. Sometimes I used to think of the past, when I recall like that experience, Im so shameful.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sunny! I don’t think you have to be embarrassed about the experiences you had when you were young. I think it might have happened to almost every kid. I remember mistaking someone else for my parents as well. Haha. That’s quite normal for children. These memories are silly, but so much fun to think about. ^^ Thank you for sharing this fun story! ^^ Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
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I can\'t think of something weird I\'ve received, but I have the experience that I made someone embarrassed.
>>I can’t think of anything weird I’ve experienced, but I once made someone feel embarrassed.
When I was young, I used to follow my mom to shopping mall or any other places.
>>When I was young, I used to go to the shopping mall and other places with my mom.
So those places are filled with people, not a few.
>>Those places were always full of people, not just a few.
I sometimes mistook another person for my mom and I talked to her casually (despite of the first time we saw each other...) or touched her.
>>I often mistook another person for my mom and talked to her casually, even though it was the first time we had seen each other. I even touched her.
I think many people who I mistook were very sudden and unexpected.
>>I think it was very sudden and unexpected for many of the people I mistook for someone else.
I didn\'t who she is but also she didn\'t know me.
>>I didn’t know who she was, and she didn’t know me either.
I don\'t know why I did it especially when I was young.
But Im sure that everyone has that experience like me.
>>But I’m sure that everyone has had that experience, like me.
Maybe I didn\'t have awareness.
>>Maybe I wasn’t aware.
Too young to recognize the situation before I see someone\'s face and talk to someone.
>>I was too young to understand the situation before seeing someone’s face and talking to them.
Sometimes I used to think of the past, when I recall like that experience, Im so shameful.
>>Sometimes I think about the past, and when I remember experiences like that, I feel so ashamed.
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