Writing Task: What\'s your opinion about arranged marriages? Why? Make a short essay about this.
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Writing Task: What\'s your opinion about arranged marriages? Why? Make a short essay about this.
I think that it is awful. I heard from my Indian colleague that they should marry a woman who their parents arranged in advance. They told me that the woman can be even a relative. I think it is really terrible. I am against it.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for answering the question as honestly as you can. :)
Until the next one!
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~Teacher Sheila
I think that it is awful.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think that is awful.
I heard from my Indian colleague that they should marry a woman who their parents arranged in advance.
>>CORRECT
They told me that the woman can be even a relative.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They told me that the women can even be a relative.
I think it is really terrible.
>>CORRECT
I am against it.
>>CORRECT
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