[Writing Task] What would you be if you were a vegetable? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were vegetable, I want to be tomato.
Because tomato is cute and
healthy. And tomato good at rolling!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework. I think tomato is a good choice.
Tomatoes are very healthy. They\'re low in calories and high in water, making them great for weight management and hydration.
I will talk to you again on Friday. Happy New Year!
__T. Mayleen :)
If I were vegetable, I want to be tomato.
>>> If I were a vegetable, I would want to be a tomato.
Because tomato is cute and
healthy. And tomato good at rolling!
healthy. And tomato good at rolling!
>>> Also, a tomato is cute and healthy, and it is excellent at rolling!
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