Writing Task: When was the last time you had a conversation with someone new?
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Hi [이름]^^
Are you still awake?
Thank you for doing your homework.
I guess this is good for you, you can make use of this to express your feelings.
Anyway, I am looking forward to speak with you again tomorrow. Good night^^
it was 3 months ago when i had conversations with new people.
>>It was 3 months ago when i had conversations with new people.
from July to August, I spent exactly four weeks in the Philippines.
>>I spent exactly four weeks in the Philippines from July to August.
it was an english learning camp .
>>It was an English learning camp .
I met some very smart and nice filipino teachers, and i talked a lot with them.
>>I met very smart and wonderful Filipino teachers and talked to them a lot.
too bad i only got to stay there for a short time.
>>Too bad I only got to stay there for a short time.
i really miss them and i feel like i still have a lot to talk about with them.
>>I really miss them and I feel like I still have a lot of things to talk with them.
escpecially one teacher, he was one of the nicest people ive ever met and i want to see him again. (im not sure if he wants to, though. haha)
>>One teacher\'s was one of the nicest people I have ever met.
I also met some nice friends, who were all younger than me since this camp was aimed for younger students.
>>I also met some good friends who are younger than me because this camp is for young students.
there was one kid who had a very similar taste of humor with me and we were in the same class!
>>There was a kid who had similar taste of humor like me and we were in the same class.
we made a lot of jokes and laughed a lot together. it was very fun.
>>We joked a lot together and laughed a lot. It was very fun.
and that is all.. sadly. after returning to korea my lifestyle was still the same as before going to the philippines.
>>That\'s it. Sadly, after I came back to Korea, my lifestyle was the same after visiting the Philippines.
i spent my whole time in my room on a daily basis. I had stopped talking again. :(
>>I spend my whole time in my room and stopped talking again.
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