[Writing Task] Which do you prefer and why..
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Hello there, Sue! ^^,)
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I agree with bread. You can bring it with you anytime and anywhere.
However, I feel like it\'s faster to prepare cereals than pancakes in the morning.
My daughter likes cereals very much.
See you later in class. :)
_Teacher Mayleen ^.^)
a) ..pancakes or cereal?
I prefer pancakes because it is more digestible.
>>> CORRECT
As you know, it is better to eat warm food in the morning.
>>> CORRECT
Besides, it is one of the most easy and quick food to prepare.
>>> Besides, it is one of the easiest food to prepare.
b) ..rice or bread?
I like bread, owing to my busy life style.
>>> I prefer bread since I have a busy lifestyle.
>>> OR: I like bread more than rice because I am always on the go.
When it compared to rice, bread is more portable food to carry.
>>> In comparison to rice, you can bring/carry bread anywhere.
Because of it, I can eat it almost everywhere.
>>> With bread, I can eat almost everywhere.
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