[Writing Task] Which do you prefer and why.. Kindly answer in not more than five (5) sentences
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a) ..pancakes or cereal?
I prefer pancakes rather than cereal, because it is a hot meal.
It is well known that hot food is healthier than the cold one.
Besides, warm and soft pancakes are the most preferable meal specially for breakfast
b) ..rice or bread?
I eat bread often, but I like rice more.
Bread help us in reducing time for preparing our meal.
But rice is very special for me as I\'m an Asian girl.
강사 첨삭
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a) ..pancakes or cereal?
I prefer pancakes rather than cereal, because it is a hot meal.
I prefer pancakes rather than cereal, because it is a hot meal.
>>> CORRECT
It is well known that hot food is healthier than the cold one.
It is well known that hot food is healthier than the cold one.
>>> CORRECT
Besides, warm and soft pancakes are the most preferable meal specially for breakfast
Besides, warm and soft pancakes are the most preferable meal specially for breakfast
>>> Besides, warm and soft pancakes are the most preferable meal especially for breakfast.
b) ..rice or bread?
I eat bread often, but I like rice more.
>>> CORRECT
Bread help us in reducing time for preparing our meal.
Bread help us in reducing time for preparing our meal.
>>> Breads help us in reducing time for preparing our meal.
But rice is very special for me as I\'m an Asian girl.
But rice is very special for me as I\'m an Asian girl.
>>> However, rice is very special for me as I\'m an Asian girl.
>>> OR: However, rice is very special for me since I\'m Asian.
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