Writing test

Q) If you were given one million dollars to spend how would you spend it? You cannot use it for yourself, family members, or friends. Discuss your ideas in an essay of 200 words. Support your ideas with reasons and examples. A) If I were given one million dollars, I would save it for studying abroad a few years later. From the time I was young, my dream was going to famous universities like Columbia, chicago or Harverd university. To studying abroad to those places, I'll need lots of money. I heard that in those places, they make students read lots of classics, phillosophy books, and so students and professor debate the topics of those books. I'm so excited to think about learning those kind of things. I think it is worth 100 million dollars. By given high quality education, I will create more money than I was given. That's all. I don't need to buy a car or house. All I want now is best education which improves my ablities.

Hi there! Thank you so much for completing your writing test. You did a pretty good job. Anyway, please be guided with the corrections that I made below and if you have any questions, please feel free to ask them to me in our class later on. Q) If you were given one million dollars to spend how would you spend it? >>CORRECT! You cannot use it for yourself, family members, or friends. >>CORRECT! Discuss your ideas in an essay of 200 words. >>CORRECT! Support your ideas with reasons and examples. >>CORRECT!A) If I were given one million dollars, I would save it for studying abroad a few years later. >>CORRECT! From the time I was young, my dream was going to famous universities like Columbia, chicago or Harverd university. >>Since  I was young, my dream was to go to famous universities like Columbia, Chicago or  Harvard university. To studying abroad to those places, I\'ll need lots of money. >>In order for me to study in those places abroad, I\'ll need lots of money. I heard that in those places, they make students read lots of classics, phillosophy books, and so students and professor debate the topics of those books. >>I heard that in those places, they make students read lots of classic and philosophy books, so the students and the professor can debate on the topics from those books. I\'m so excited to think about learning those kind of things. >>CORRECT! I think it is worth 100 million dollars. By given high quality education, I will create more money than I was given. >>I think it is worth 100 million dollars, given a high quality of education, I will create more money than I was given. That\'s all. I don\'t need to buy a car or house. >>That\'s all, I don\'t need to buy a car or a house. All I want now is best education which improves my ablities. >>All I want now is the best education which will help improve my abilities.