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There are many things that symbolize Korea to the world.
Recently, K-POP\'s fame has increased, this happening showed to many people who didn\'t know Korea.
Therefore K-POP is the most famous thing that symbolizes Korea all over the world.
But traditionally, the most famous thing that symbolizes Korea is kimchi.
Kimchi is the most common thing that foreigners think about Korea as much as K-POP.
Kimchi is the most famous Korean traditional food and is very good for health and has many kinds of recipes so this food is very famous.
Almost all Korean houses have many different kinds of Kimchi.
For these reasons, I think the two things are the most famous Korea symbolizing things.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름]!
You have written a full length essay, well done! Congratulations!
Indeed, K-Pop is playing everywhere in the world and gaining more and more popularity. Thanks to the hardworking boy and girl groups.
See you in class later.
-T. Donna
>> Correct!
Recently, K-POP\'s fame has increased, this happening showed to many people who didn\'t know Korea.
>> Correct!
Therefore K-POP is the most famous thing that symbolizes Korea all over the world.
>> Correct!
But traditionally, the most famous thing that symbolizes Korea is kimchi.
>> Correct!
Kimchi is the most common thing that foreigners think about Korea as much as K-POP.
>> Correct!
Kimchi is the most famous Korean traditional food and is very good for health and has many kinds of recipes so this food is very famous.
>> Correct!
Almost all Korean houses have many different kinds of Kimchi.
>> Correct!
For these reasons, I think the two things are the most famous Korea symbolizing things.
>> For these reasons, I think the two things are the most famous Korean symbols.
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