Writting In the middle of May.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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May has many day to celebrate.
>> We celebrate many special days in May.
Maybe, that\'s why Koreans refer May to \"Queen of Season\"
>> Maybe that\'s why Koreans refer May as the \"Queen of Seasons\".
may have worker\'s day, children\'s day, mother day, father day(we have parents\' day.) teacher\'s day, and BUDA\'s birth day and the most important My birth day!
>> The holidays in May are Workers\' Day, Children\'\' Day, Mother\'s Day, Father\'s Day, (we call it Parents\' Day), Teachers\' Day, Buddha\'s birthday, and the most important of all is my birthday!
just kidding.
>> Correct.
we get by, forgeting a important thing.
>> As we get older, we start to forget important things.
that thing will be various, In many view points. but I think the thing is appreciating about something.
>> These can be a variety of things according to many view points but I think the most important is appreciating things.
(If I\'m wrong, when I write this sentence to [I think the thing is appreciating]? )
>> (Is it wrong if I write the sentence this way: [I think the thing is appreciating]?)
so I took a deep breath and had a moment to think of my people.
>> Correct.
and
>> and....(to be continued...) ^^
1.He doesn\'t have to work in the evening.
>> Correct!
2.We don\'t have to_ go shopping.
>> Correct!
3.The friends don\'t have to_ get up early.
>> Correct!
4.Mandy doesn\'t have to read the instructions.
>> Correct!
5.You don\'t have to do the project.
>> Correct!
6.I don\'t have to play the guitar.
>> Correct!
7.They don\'t have to carry the buckets.
>> Correct!
8.She doesn\'t have to wash my T-shirt.
>> Correct!
9.Mom doesn\'t have to make sandwiches.
>> Correct!
10.Frank and Joel don\'t have to draw a pictur
>> Correct! (Spelling check: picture)
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