Wuhan pneumonia
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Actually, I haven\'t a new issue recently except Wuhan pneumonia, so I don\'t have any idea about another one. But about Wuhan pneumonia, every new issue has been updating. In Korea, there were only 25 confirmed patient until yesterday, and I wasn\'t concerned about it seriously that much because spreading speed is not as fast as other country. But in this morning, I\'ve heard that 18 more people in Daegu have been confirmed as patients. Actually, I have a plan to play soccer with my friends against another team in Daegu, but because of this issue, we changed the plan and just canceled it. I think it is becoming more serious because the fact that 18 more people have been confirmed in only a day means we don\'t know who is confirmed and not. I am wearing a mask while I am writing this in Cafe. I hope this issue gets better soon.
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1. Actually, I haven\'t a new issue recently except Wuhan pneumonia, so I don\'t have any idea about another one.
>>Actually, I haven\'t heard a new issue recently except Wuhan pneumonia, so , I don\'t have any idea about another one.
>>Actually, I haven\'t heard a new issue recently except Wuhan pneumonia, so , I don\'t have any idea about another one.
2. But about Wuhan pneumonia, every new issue has been updating.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But about Wuhan pneumonia news, it\'s being updated every now and then.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But about Wuhan pneumonia news, it\'s being updated every now and then.
3. In Korea, there were only 25 confirmed patient until yesterday, and I wasn\'t concerned about it seriously that much because spreading speed is not as fast as other country.
>>In Korea, there are only 25 confirmed patients until yesterday, and I wasn\'t concerned about it seriously that much because the spread of the virus is not as fast as other country.
>>In Korea, there are only 25 confirmed patients until yesterday, and I wasn\'t concerned about it seriously that much because the spread of the virus is not as fast as other country.
4. But in this morning, I\'ve heard that 18 more people in Daegu have been confirmed as patients.
>>But this morning, I\'ve heard that 18 more people in Daegu have been confirmed as patients.
5. Actually, I have a plan to play soccer with my friends against another team in Daegu, but because of this issue, we changed the plan and just canceled it.
>>Actually, I had a plan to play soccer with my friends against another team in Daegu, but because of this issue, we changed the plan and just canceled it.
>>Actually, I had a plan to play soccer with my friends against another team in Daegu, but because of this issue, we changed the plan and just canceled it.
6. I think it is becoming more serious because the fact that 18 more people have been confirmed in only a day means we don\'t know who is confirmed and not.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think it is becoming more serious because the fact that 18 more people have been confirmed in only a day means we don\'t know who is confirmed and not.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think it is becoming more serious because the fact that 18 more people have been confirmed in only a day means we don\'t know who is confirmed and not.
7. I am wearing a mask while I am writing this in Cafe.
>>I am wearing a mask while I am writing this in a cafe.
>>I am wearing a mask while I am writing this in a cafe.
8. I hope this issue gets better soon.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I hope this issue gets resolved soon.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I hope this issue gets resolved soon.
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