X-mas
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Hi there! I did not answer your phone. I was sorry having company dinner last night. We have a Christmas traditional. When I was young my parents told me. Santa Claus will give gifts to kind kids. Where put some presents are the socks on the wall and behind pillow. So I made an effort to be a nice boy. I knew that is a lie when I was 10 years old.
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Hi there, William. Happy almost Christmas eve!^^ I hope you are enjoying your evening with your family no matter how many there are you have to take care of. Thank you for sharing your childhood Christmas story. I\'m sure some people have experienced the same thing :) Have a great weekend. Cheers! ~Jane c\",
I did not answer your phone.
>> I did not answer your call.
I was sorry having company dinner last night.
>> I am sorry I was having a company dinner last night.
We have a Christmas traditional.
>> We had a Christmas tradition.
When I was young my parents told me. Santa Claus will give gifts to kind kids.
>> When I was young my parents told me Santa Claus will give gifts to kind kids.
Where put some presents are the socks on the wall and behind pillow.
>> He will put presents in the socks on the wall and behind the pillow.
So I made an effort to be a nice boy.
>> CORRECT =)
I knew that is a lie when I was 10 years old.
>> I found out it was all a lie when I was 10 years old.
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