X-mas day

2019-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is Christmas eve ~~!!^^ Merry Christmas Christina....God bless you and your family,,, I plan to finish my work early . Because I will do christmas party with my family. We will go to my mother in law house after dinner. Brother in law will prepare for a christmas cake. We will celerbrate today party. My wife will give a gift to may daughter. I think that she will be happy to get a gift ,because that is my daughter\'s favorite toy. She really love it. I want that today is the best day for my daughter.

강사 첨삭

Hello D.S.!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Today is Christmas eve ~~!!^^ Merry Christmas Christina....God bless you and your family,,,
>> :) :) :)
I plan to finish my work early . Because I will do christmas party with my family.
>> I plan to finish my work early because I will have a Christmas party with my family.
We will go to my mother in law house after dinner. Brother in law will prepare for a christmas cake. We will celerbrate today party.
>> We will go to my mother-in-law\'s house after dinner, my brother-in-law will prepare a Christmas cake. 

We will celerbrate today party.

>> We will celebrate and have a party today.
My wife will give a gift to may daughter. 

>> My wife will give a gift to my daughter. 

I think that she will be happy to get a gift ,because that is my daughter\'s favorite toy.
>> I think that my daughter will be happy to receive our gift because that is her favorite toy.
She really love it. 

>> She will really love it. 

I want that today is the best day for my daughter.

>> I want today to be the best day for my daughter.


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Thank you for lovely message D.S.! I wish a happy new year to you and your family! :)

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