xenophobia
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with president\'s opinion.
This is not freedom of expression but hooliganism.
It is an example of crisis of democracy in Korea society.
We must punished people who promote extreme division. and spreading fake news .
They gain the power and money through social division. They are corrupted politicians and bad You tubers.
It is sad that we have no choice to exist with many stupid and irrational massses.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
There are many factors why people hate other people, but for extreme reason that involves violence, is what I do not understand.
We always know that while humans exist, we often get a chance to encounter different kinds of people, and that includes even the person whom you really do not like; however, we live in a civilized world, wherein civil behavior is expected.
See you later!
Aki~
I agree with president\'s opinion.
>>> I agree with the president\'s opinion.
This is not freedom of expression but hooliganism.
>>> CORRECT!
It is an example of crisis of democracy in Korea society.
>>> It is an example of a crisis of democracy in a Korean society.
We must punished people who promote extreme division. and spreading fake news .
>>> We must punish the people who promote extreme division. and spreading fake news.
They gain the power and money through social division. They are corrupted politicians and bad You tubers.
>>> They gain power and money through social division. They are corrupted politicians and bad YouTubers.
It is sad that we have no choice to exist with many stupid and irrational massses.
>>> It is sad that we have no choice but to exist with many stupid and irrational masses.
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