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2019-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

es i have, when i was 10 years old, i lose the remote control at home. So i looked for the remote control but i didn\'t find that. But suddenly my grand mother give that to me. Because i watched TV a lot, so she hound the remote control.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your homework. ^^

I must say that you\'re grandmother was really clever to hide that remote control. ^^

Anyway, have a good night and always take care.

~Teacher Gina

Yes i have, when i was 10 years old, i lose the remote control at home.

>> Yes I have. When I was 10 years old, I lost the remote control at home.
So i looked for the remote control but i didn\'t find that.

>> So I looked for the remote control but I didn\'t find it.
But suddenly my grand mother give that to me.

>> But my grandmother suddenly gave it to me.
Because i watched TV a lot, so she hound the remote control.

>> Because I watched TV a lot, she hid the remote control.

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