yeah..
학생이 쓴 원문
I was in the united states. I went to Grand Canyon in Nevada
I have ever never seen like this huge great canyon. that time was in the winter season.
it was made me a nothing in the earth.. and I felt again that the nature is always great.
It was not easy to go there I had driven for four hour over.. also the way to go there is also great for me
because we don\'t have like this huge mother nature..
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer to me.
I really appreciate you for sharing your experience and of what you have experienced during your travel. ^^
Indeed, mother nature is really great!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
I have ever never seen like this huge great canyon. that time was in the winter season.
I have ever never seen like this huge great canyon. that time was in the winter season.
>> I have never seen a huge great canyon like this. It was the winter season that time.
it was made me a nothing in the earth..
it was made me a nothing in the earth..
>> It made me feel nothing compared to the earth.
and I felt again that the nature is always great.
>> CORRECT.
It was not easy to go there I had driven for four hour over..
It was not easy to go there I had driven for four hour over..
>> It was not easy to go there since I had driven for over four hours.
also the way to go there is also great for me because we don\'t have like this huge mother nature..
>> Also, the way to go there is also great for me because we don\'t have anything like this huge mother nature.
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