YEAH!!!^^^

2012-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

학생이 쓴 원문

*** You are given the chance to talk to the president of Korea, what will you ask him? Why?^^ We are president's image is not good, So I will ask for him some question. First, Why was politics like this? Second, How about think good politics? Third, Why didn't make a law for a ordinary people? Fourth, how about your's Image?

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear [이름] .^__^.   I am so happy to receive your composition today and as promised, I will be checking your composition also. ^^ Anyway, before anything else, I would like to congratulate you for continuously doing a good job during our class time. And thank you for being so diligent and passionate about English.   As for your homework, wow, you certainly have a lot of questions for the president of Korea. I think, that would mean you aren\'t that satisfied with his governance. kkkkk... How about you my dear [이름], what are you going to do if ever you become the president of Korea? How are you going to change the present political sysytem of your country?   Have a good evening for now and I\'ll call you later. Have a wonderful time.^^   T. Janette   We are president\'s image is not good, So I will ask for him some question. >> Our president\'s image is not good so I will ask him some questions.First, Why was politics like this? >> First, why is our political system like this?Second, How about think good politics? >> Second, why won\'t you consider having a good political system?Third, Why didn\'t make a law for a ordinary people? >> Third,why didn\'t you make a law for ordinary people?Fourth, how about your\'s Image? >> Fourth, what can you do about your image right now?

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