yeah~ impeachment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday!
Congratulations on your victory!!
I am very happy about the result of the impeachment...
I can\'t wait to hear more about this.
Take care and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!
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Today on 11a.m there was a Adjudication on impeachment
>>Today at 11 am there was an adjudication on impeachment.
I was in my school, so teacher show us on tv
>>I was at school so our teacher showed it on TV.
I was really nervous
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And the result was expulsion of park
>>And the result was she needs to step down.
I was so happy and all of my friend were heppy
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Also most of people in korea was happy
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Now park is a civilian so, she have to arrest (imprisonment)
>>Now that she is just an ordinary person, she has to be arrested.
And put her in to prison
>>And she has to be imprisoned.
When Constitutional Court announcement about park\'s impeachment
>>When the Constitutional Court announced her impeachment...
Park\'s fan was really mad
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I heard 2people of park\'s fan was died today;;
>>I even hear two of her very avid fans died today.
It\'s sorry for them but i don\'t know why they love park
>>I felt sorry about them but I don\'t understand why they love her.
I can\'t understand :(
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Anyway let\'s talk more about park on the class
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See you on the class
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