Yeongwol
학생이 쓴 원문
To those who are interested in Korean history, the city is known as the exile site of King Dan Jong, the little king of Jose on Dynasty, who was expelled by his uncle. Many people haven\'t known the city and its location until the fact that it has a Korean peninsula shaped cliff was aired.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I think Yeongwol holds significant value in Korea not just because of the cliff shaped like the Korean peninsula, but also because of its historical importance. Like you mentioned in class, visiting the area to appreciate the view also reminded you of history, which I believe is very important for the younger generation these days.
- T. Caitlyn
To those who are interested in Korean history, the city is known as the exile site of King Dan Jong, the little king of Jose on Dynasty, who was expelled by his uncle.
>> To those who are interested in Korean history, the city is known as the exile site of King Danjong, the young king of the Joseon Dynasty, who was expelled by his uncle.
Many people haven\'t known the city and its location until the fact that it has a Korean peninsula shaped cliff was aired.
>> Many people didn’t know about the city or its location until the fact that it has a cliff shaped like the Korean peninsula was broadcast.
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