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Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework. I must say you are very expressive with your thoughts.

You told me about what you do when you do a hard work and I hope everybody could party every time they do a

hard work like you do. How often are this parties? I hope it would be as often as you doing a lot of hard work.^^

Anyways, I appreciate your ideas and it was fun reading it. Just be very careful with your verb tenses. Try to know when to use future

tenses if the situation will be later and past tenses of course if the action had been done or finished. I hope to hear more from you

next time. Take care ^^

Teacher Nina ^^
Here are some of my corrections for you:

When we finished some hard work or training,we hold a party.

>> When we finish working hard or training, we hold/have a party.
we celebrate our patience and passion.but it is not welcomed for everyone.

>> We celebrate our patience and passion, but it\'s not open for everyone.

>> OR: We celebrate our patience and passion, but everyone is not welcome.
Like me, there are lots of people who doesn\'t drink alcohol much.

>> Like me, there are lots of people who don\'t drink a lot of alcohol.
So they want to evitate as they can.

>> CORRECT [avoid it]

>> OR:  So they want to avoid/resist it.
I think it is the last mission of hard work.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I think it is the essence of had work.
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last sunday, carolyn has been cured.

>> Last Sunday, Carolyn has been cured.

>> OR: Last Sunday, Carolyn felt better.
I really happy because i stayed with her this weekend to take care of her. and we enjoyed our weekend.

>> I\'m really happy because I stayed and took care of her this weekend and we both enjoyed it.^^