Yes...
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't have many experiences in my childhood.
because time wipe out my old memories..
but there is a special memory which is always in my mind.
That was my story about speeching.
At that time I was about 6 years old.
My mother want me to go educational group and I finally went to go the speech school. So In the morning what I have to do is going to speech school.
Having been stared speech about 3-month, I participated in a speech competition.
At that time I didn't have any concept of speech, I just memorised it and talked to audience. So I didn't feel fear to be in front of many audience.
Finally I finished my speech. My mother felt proud of me and cheered me up for finishing speech. Finally the result was released, and I awarded 2nd prise.
I didn't have any expectation about it, but I was happy.
and the trophy which I got is still in my room.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about it.
I was inspired! It\'s nice that your parents were proud of you.
I am also proud of you because I know you did great.
What was your speech all about? I hope that you are having a great time.
Take Care! Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina
>> Correct!
>> OR: I don\'t have a lot of experiences in my childhood.
because time wipe out my old memories..
because time wipe out my old memories..
>> Because time wiped out my old memories.
but there is a special memory which is always in my mind.
but there is a special memory which is always in my mind.
>> Correct!
That was my story about speeching.
That was my story about speeching.
>> It was a story about my speech.
>> OR: It was a story about giving a speech.
At that time I was about 6 years old.
At that time I was about 6 years old.
>> Correct!
>> OR: It happened when I was about six years old.
My mother want me to go educational group and I finally went to go the speech school.
My mother want me to go educational group and I finally went to go the speech school.
>> My mother wanted me to go to join an educational group and I finally went to a school to improve my speech.
>> OR: My mother wanted me to enter a school for speech.
So In the morning what I have to do is going to speech school.
>> So, in the morning I had to do is to go to a speech school.
Having been stared speech about 3-month, I participated in a speech competition.
Having been stared speech about 3-month, I participated in a speech competition.
>> I started learning for about three months and I participated in a speech competition.
At that time I didn\'t have any concept of speech, I just memorised it and talked to audience.
At that time I didn\'t have any concept of speech, I just memorised it and talked to audience.
>> At that time. I didn\'t have any idea about giving a speech, I just memorized it and imparted it to the audience. ( spelling check: memorize ^^)
So I didn\'t feel fear to be in front of many audience.
>> So. I didn\'t feel scared to be in front of a lot of audience.
>> OR: So, I didn\'t feel anxious to stand in front many people.
Finally I finished my speech.
Finally I finished my speech.
>> Correct!
My mother felt proud of me and cheered me up for finishing speech.
>> My mother was proud of me and cheered me up for finishing my speech.
Finally the result was released, and I awarded 2nd prise.
>> Finally, the result was released and I got the second prize. ( spelling check: prize ^^)
>> OR: When the result was released, I got the second place.
I didn\'t have any expectation about it, but I was happy.
I didn\'t have any expectation about it, but I was happy.
>> I didn\'t expect it but I was happy.
and the trophy which I got is still in my room.
and the trophy which I got is still in my room.
>> And the trophy I got is still in my room.
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