Yes,
학생이 쓴 원문
It is harmful for dogs or any other aniamal to be carried by cabin.
I think it is very stressful. Imagine you are in case where all of things are in black. It is similiar with being a blind for a moment.
They can't talk with us and can't understand what we think,
so they get stressed.
In additionally, the circumstances in storage cabin, It doesn't have any airconditioner. so the temperater is relevant to the altitude of airplane.
I don't know the facility of animal transfortation, I heard that cabin will became a very cold place when plane goes up.
Human right is very important but many people ignore that of animals.
Not limitted at dog, every animanls can be the partner of us.
So we should love every animals living with us in earth.
That's the way I think.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again!
You are really a great person.
I hope that a lot of people know what you mentioned below.
They sometimes ignore animals on the street or some even hurt them.
They sometimes ignore animals on the street or some even hurt them.
It is really difficult if a person hate animals.
We should always be kind to other people and to animals too.
Have a nice day.
Teacher Nina
>> Correct ( spelling check: animal ^_^)
I think it is very stressful.
I think it is very stressful.
>> Correct
Imagine you are in case where all of things are in black.
>> Imagine that you are in a case where it is dark.
It is similiar with being a blind for a moment.
>> It is similar with being blind for a short period of time.
They can\'t talk with us and can\'t understand what we think, so they get stressed.
They can\'t talk with us and can\'t understand what we think, so they get stressed.
>> They can\'t talk to us and can\'t understand what are we thinking, so they get stressed.
>> OR: >> They can\'t talk to us and can\'t understand what are we thinking, so they feel stressed.
In additionally, the circumstances in storage cabin, It doesn\'t have any airconditioner.
>> OR: >> They can\'t talk to us and can\'t understand what are we thinking, so they feel stressed.
In additionally, the circumstances in storage cabin, It doesn\'t have any airconditioner.
>> In addition, the circumstances in a storage cabin is that they don\'t have an air conditioner.
so the temperater is relevant to the altitude of airplane.
>> So the temperature is relevant to the altitude of the airplane.
I don\'t know the facility of animal transfortation, I heard that cabin will became a very cold place when plane goes up.
I don\'t know the facility of animal transfortation, I heard that cabin will became a very cold place when plane goes up.
>> I don\'t know anything about the facility of animal transportation. I heard that the cabin will become a very cold place when the plane goes up. ( spelling check: transportation ^^)
Human right is very important but many people ignore that of animals.
Human right is very important but many people ignore that of animals.
>> Correct
>> OR: The rights of humans are very important but many people ignore that of the animals.
Not limitted at dog, every animanls can be the partner of us.
Not limitted at dog, every animanls can be the partner of us.
>> It is not limited within a dog, every animal can be our partner.
So we should love every animals living with us in earth.
So we should love every animals living with us in earth.
>> So we should love every animal that is living with us in Earth.
That\'s the way I think
That\'s the way I think
>> Correct
>> OR: That\'s my opinion about this topic.
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