Yes
학생이 쓴 원문
i am!
When i was younger, i can\'t sleep away from home.
But i can sleep easily every where after when l joined army.
So now, when i lie, i can sleep right now.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer about the homework question I sent last time. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
When I was younger, i can\'t sleep away from home.
When I was younger, i can\'t sleep away from home.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: When I was younger, I can\'t easily sleep when I\'m far away from home.
But i can sleep easily every where after when l joined army.
But i can sleep easily every where after when l joined army.
>> But I can sleep easily anywhere when I joined the army.
So now, when i lie, i can sleep right now.
So now, when i lie, i can sleep right now.
>> So now, when I lie down, I can sleep right away.
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